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Dear sir
This is congratulate to you on the winning of the National Awards for the Empowerment of Persons with Disabilities as Best Individual by The President of India on World Disabled day on 3rd dec at New Delhi. It was very great for you to achieve this award on a big achievement. You really dedicated your life for disabled people for many years.
I need to inform you that I have been recently selected in Accenture Company as Praveen from your office told. But I have not got an appointment letter order yet. Hope it will take for few days.
Please let me know if such opportunity job are matching to my profit as well as monthly salary. Because I have got a good work experience for over four years. My previous company offered me for monthly salary which was Rs 12,000 per month. If you say yes at all. I would be ready to willingly join in Accenture Company. I am forward looking to your reply.
This is congratulate to you on the winning of the National Awards for the Empowerment of Persons with Disabilities as Best Individual by The President of India on World Disabled day on 3rd dec at New Delhi. It was very great for you to achieve this award on a big achievement. You really dedicated your life for disabled people for many years.
I need to inform you that I have been recently selected in Accenture Company as Praveen from your office told. But I have not got an appointment letter order yet. Hope it will take for few days.
Please let me know if such opportunity job are matching to my profit as well as monthly salary. Because I have got a good work experience for over four years. My previous company offered me for monthly salary which was Rs 12,000 per month. If you say yes at all. I would be ready to willingly join in Accenture Company. I am forward looking to your reply.
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I have underlined some problem areas and struck out useless verbiage: Dear sir This i s con gratulate to you on the winning of the National Award s for the Empowerment of Persons with Disabilities as Best Individual by The President of India on World Disabled day on 3rd dec a t New Delhi. It was very great for you to achieve this award on a big achievement . You really dedicated your life for disabled people for many years.
- I have underlined some problem areas and struck out useless verbiage: Dear sir This i s con gratulate to you on the winning of the National Award s for the Empowerment of Persons with Disabilities as Best Individual by The President of India on World Disabled day on 3rd dec a t New Delhi.
- It was very great for you to achieve this award on a big achievement .
- You really dedicated your life for disabled people for many years.
- I need to inform you that I have been recently selected in Accenture Company, as Praveen from your office told.
- B ut I have not got an appointment letter order yet.
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I have underlined some problem areas and struck out useless verbiage:
Dear sir
This is congratulateto you on the winning of the National Awards for the Empowerment of Persons with Disabilities as Best Individual by The President of India on World Disabled day on 3rd dec at New Delhi. It was ve
Dear sir
This is congratulate
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