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Jack runs for the nearest door and is gone a second later when Pete and Toby come around the corner. As they pass that same door - the door to the men's restroom - Pete stops. Toby looks at him, "What?". "I have to pee", Pete says, and enters the restroom.
is gone should be corrected to has gone
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Jack runs for the nearest door and has disappeared by the time Pete and Toby come around the corner a second later. As they pass that same door, the door to the men's restroom, Pete stops.
Toby looks at him, "What?"
"I have to pee", Pete says, and enters the restroom.