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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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Please check this dialogue

Chad - What happened between you last night?

Timmy - What has she told you?

Chad - She told me you were being weird and were yelling at her. (1)

Timmy - Really?

Chad - Yes. Is that not what happened?

Timmy - No.

Chad - Then, what happened according to you? (2)

Timmy - We were just discussing a few things. (3)


Questions:

(1) Is "were being weird" and "were yelling" natural here?

(2) How would you phrase this sentence?

(3) Would it be more natural to say "We just discussed a few things"?

  

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That dialogue is all OK, except that in this kind of script-style dialogue we usually use colons, not dashes (which you have in any case typed as hyphens), like this: Chad: What happened between you last night? Timmy: What has she told you? "being weird" is OK if "weird" is what you mean.

  • That dialogue is all OK, except that in this kind of script-style dialogue we usually use colons, not dashes (which you have in any case typed as hyphens), like this: Chad: What happened between you last night?
  • Timmy: What has she told you?
  • "being weird" is OK if "weird" is what you mean.
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That dialogue is all OK, except that in this kind of script-style dialogue we usually use colons, not dashes (which you have in any case typed as hyphens), like this:

Chad: What happened between you last night?
Timmy: What has she told you?

"being weird" is OK if "weird" is what you mean.

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