'focusing on how the attitudes of society affect the relationship between the main characters'. You haven't really answered this part of the question and they've told you that should be the main focus of your answer, meaning that most of your answer should be dedicated to that. All you've done is describe the plot, and that doesn't answer the question at all ...
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.