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The scene is in an office in a hospital.

Doctor Lewis sits behind a desk, informing Britt.

Doctor: I can imagine you're eager to get an update on your daughter's situation, so I thought I'd just give you that. As you know, she's still in a lot of pain, but that's normal at this point. The most important thing is that we can see she's making progress. So for now we don't believe surgery is needed.

Britt: Do you believe she's going to fully recover?

Doctor: We do believe that, yes.


Is the line introducing the scene correct? Is "informing" the word you would choose?

Is the dialogue natural?

  

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The scene is in an office in a hospital. Doctor Lewis sits behind a desk, informing Britt. (you inform someone about/of something.

  • The scene is in an office in a hospital.
  • Doctor Lewis sits behind a desk, informing Britt.
  • (you inform someone about/of something.
  • eg Doctor Lewis sits behind a desk, informing Britt about her daughter's condition..
  • Doctor: I can imagine you're eager to get an update on your daughter's situation, so I thought I'd just give you that.
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The scene is in an office in a hospital.

Doctor Lewis sits behind a desk, informing Britt. (you inform someone about/of something.

eg Doctor Lewis sits behind a desk, informing Britt about her daughter's condition..

Doctor: I can imagine you're eager to get an update on your daughter's situation, so I thought I'd just give you that. As you know, she's still in

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