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I'm a student from Bulgaria. I will be really happy if check the grammar of my homework. We have to make some sort of essay on "Who is your idol". Thank you! Correct me if something is wrong! Here it is:

From the current celebrities I do not want anyone to be my idol. Because when people have an idol they often start just copying it. And when you are copying someone you are loosing your own personality. When that happens you are just a stupid imitator that in most cases nobody likes. When nobody likes you start becoming insane. After that you kill your idol because you are obsessed from the idea to be famous. 

It's cool to like a singer or any type of start but it is not good to start imitating it. That is why I prefer not having an idol. Yes, i have favorite singers and actors but I do not want to be like them what in case is to have an idol. From the current celebrities I do not want anyone to be my idol. Because when people have an idol they often start just copying it. And when you are copying someone you are loosing your own personality. When that happens you are just a stupid imitator that in most cases nobody likes. When nobody likes you start becoming insane. After that you kill your idol because you are obsessed from the idea to be famous. 

It's cool to like a singer or any type of start but it is not good to start imitating it. That is why I prefer not having an idol. Yes, i have favorite singers and actors but I do not want to be like them what in case is to have an idol. 

Thanks again!