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Ahn Posted 19 years ago
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1)The tears may imply frustration over the reality of international sports diplomacy which is run by money pouring and political calculations rather than thorough preparation and dedication
Is there any ungrammatical or unnatural expression? Can 'money pouring' refer to the activity that a country spend too much money to bid for a big games such as Oylmpic?
Is there any ungrammatical or unnatural expression? Can 'money pouring' refer to the activity that a country spend too much money to bid for a big games such as Oylmpic?
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The phrase "money pouring" is not natural. I would also place "political calculations" first and make it singular. "
- The phrase "money pouring" is not natural.
- I would also place "political calculations" first and make it singular.
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The phrase "money pouring" is not natural. I would also place "political calculations" first and make it singular.
"...which is run by political calculation and massive injections of money..." or "...which is run by political calculation and money being haemorraghed " or "...which is run by political calculation and floods of money ..."
"...which is run by political calculation and massive injections of money..." or "...which is run by political calculation and money being haemorraghed " or "...which is run by political calculation and floods of money ..."
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