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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Using a comma plus a joining word (and, but, although, because, which or who), join these pairs of sentences.

I’m going to buy sweets lots of them.
I’m going to buy sweets because lots of them.

When he went to university his mum gave him a big pile of money enough to last him a month.
When he went to university, his mum gave him a big pile of money which were enough to last him a month.

The trip has been rescheduled for Monday maybe Thursday.
The trip has been rescheduled for Monday but maybe Thursday.

Molly found her purse down the back of the sofa.
Molly found her purse which was down the back of the sofa.

There is only one meal worth eating pie and chips.
There is only one meal worth eating which is pie and chips.

There is no room left in the hotel let me repeat: No Room.
There is no room left in the hotel, and let me repeat: No Room.

Permission is granted subject to the following conditions.
Permission is granted and subject to the following conditions.

The films all three of them took years to complete.
The films, who are all three of them and took years to complete.
  

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You need to pay attention to reasonable meanings for your sentences. ): When he went to university, his mum gave him a big pile of mon ey, whi ch were enough to last him a month. Molly found her pu rse, whi ch was down the back of the sofa.

— Mister Micawber

  • You need to pay attention to reasonable meanings for your sentences.
  • ): When he went to university, his mum gave him a big pile of mon ey, whi ch were enough to last him a month.
  • Molly found her pu rse, whi ch was down the back of the sofa.
  • There is only one meal worth eati ng, w hich is pie and chips.
  • There is no room left in the hotel, and let me repeat: no room .
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You need to pay attention to reasonable meanings for your sentences. These four are passable, though not very good sentences (nor are some of the originals!):

When he went to university, his mum gave him a big pile of money, which were enough to last him a month.
Molly found her purse, which was down the back of the sofa.
There is only one meal wort
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AnonymousUsing a comma plus a joining word (and, but, although, because, which or who), join these pairs of sentences.
Also, you say you are asked to join pairs of sentences, but you have not given us any pairs of sentences.
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please check if I use only Commas. Or is there any other option to correct these sentences.

I’m going to buy sweets lots of them.
I’m going to buy sweets, lots of them.

The trip has been rescheduled for Monday maybe Thursday.
The trip has been rescheduled for Monday, maybe Thursday.

Permission is granted subject to the following conditions
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I’m going to buy sweets lots of them.
I’m going to buy sweets because lots of them.
I’m going to buy sweets, and lots of them.

When he went to university his mum gave him a big pile of money enough to last him a month.
When he went to university, his mum gave him a big pile of money which were
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