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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

PLEASE check the Syntax, Composition Writing, Grammar, paragraphs, etc...

Regarding my CV, I do not want to show what is more impressive or to show that I am fully charge of a group or to giving a stress of the size of a group.

The only thing I am asking from you is to change and/or amend my text in order to be retained a uniformity!

I would like to be consistent! This is what I am asking is to modify the fragments of the text in order to be consistent.

A fragment or a sentence, cannot starts with a participle and sometimes with a 3rd person or past finite verb, and sometimes a noun phrase!

Please forget about the structure and other matters which are related about the presentation of my CV. I would like to correct the grammar and syntax of the content.

Emotion: smile



Please do focus to the following content:



Work experience

Dates: 01
January 2003 - 30 April 2011


Occupation or position held: Senior Accountant and Systems Administrator

Planning of the bookkeeping to be undertaken by the
accounting staff, involving the preparation of time and cost budgets and
supervising the accounting staff work and helping them with any technical
difficulties that they may come across;

Preparing cash flows and income/expenditure budgets,
monitoring the company’s expenditure/costs, payments to suppliers and liaising
with staff and the banks concerning debt collection;

Updating and maintaining on a daily basis the accounting
records of the company with extracting and interpreting the financial records
of the company at any given time;

Responsible for supporting the company’s Windows Server
2003, Active directory, Exchange, VMware virtualization, application support,
Server Administration and Security as well as Backup and Disaster recovery;

Providing day-to-day support for infrastructure and security
components such as Network Switches, Firewalls, WAN connectivity, VPN and
Anti-Virus;

Manages the company’s Servers, Workstations and X terminals,
setting up user accounts, scheduling upgrades and implements security protocols
to ensure Database and System security;

Recommends and directs software changes and updates to keep
department systems up-to-date and is responsible for the provision of IT
infrastructure services including Desktop applications, Local and / or Wide
area networks, IT security and Telecommunications;

Programs specific applications in response to department/
client needs, installing and debugging new and/ or upgraded software on Server
and Client platforms, ensuring compliance with current site Licenses, Designs,
Programs and manages websites and associated pages;

Creates web content, web graphics, multimedia and creative
writing content for websites, assisting in developing user policies and
procedures, issues written and/ or oral instructions, investigates and reports
complaints;

Develops and implements various training and instruction
programs for users on the use of Operating Systems, Networking, Applications
and Databases and provides advice to other senior managers and boards on IT
issues and planning.

Dates: 01 September 2000 - 01 September 2002

Occupation or position held: Computer
Programmer

Supporting and maintaining the company’s Web Servers, Mail
Servers and Application Servers and planning for and responding to service
outages and other problems;

Solving of software and hardware problems for the operations
of the IT department as well as the needs of the company’s external customers;

Troubleshooting networks, systems, and applications to
identify and correct malfunctions and other operational problems;

Configuring and customizing the company's Enterprise Backup
system which consists of multiple Backup Servers, Backup Clients, and Backup
Libraries;

Cisco Networking and VOIP. CCNA / CCNP networking skills and
knowledge of supporting systems within the organization;

Object oriented development including JAVA (Applications,
Applets, Servlets), Visual Café, HTML, SQL-Databases (Access, SQL Server,
Oracle DB, mySQL, FoxPro), Windows 9x, Windows 2000, NT and Server Management
(Oracle, Apache Tomcat, IIS, Apache WebServer).

Dates: 01 June 1995 - 30 June 1999

Occupation or position held: Financial Controller

Involves in maintaining and updating accounting records of
many of the firm’s local and overseas clients and taking care of VAT issues
(VAT records, completion of VAT returns, etc.);

Participating in various Audits (as a junior and semi-senior
Auditor) of both local and overseas companies, preparing draft Audited accounts
for finalization purposes, tax computations and completing tax forms both for
corporations as well as self employed individuals and other related tasks;

Collecting, analyzing and grouping documentary evidence in
order to proceed with the preparation of periodic Management Accounts and
Annual financial Accounts of the firm;

Performing bookkeeping and payroll entries regularly as well
as meetings with the Managing Partner, discussing the results with him and
other matters, such as advice concerning the firm’s Tax position, profitability
and cash flow projections;

Performing and supervising of highly complex payroll and
benefits activity for 20 employees, calculating of the firm's PAYE taxes,
social security contributions, medical fund premiums and any other similar
deductions, resolving non-routine problems, interpreting policies and contracts
and implementing the firm's policies and procedures;

Regular contacts with the Central Bank of Cyprus, the
Department of the Registrar of Companies and Official Receiver, the Tax
Authorities, Immigration and other Authorities of Cyprus mainly for accounting,
tax and auditing issues but also for issues such as work permit renewals,
social insurance issues, etc.

Dates: 01 January 1993 - 31 May 1995

Occupation or position held: Owner

Maintaining the appropriate
inventory levels;

Data handling and communication
with suppliers and key customers;

Supervising the operations and
financial records of the business.

Dates: 01 January 1993 - 30 April 1995

Occupation or position held: Broadcast
and Sound Recording Engineer


Connecting wires and cables, setting and operating Audio and
Video equipment, including microphones, sound speakers, video screens,
projectors, video monitors, recording equipment and related electronic
equipment for concerts, sports events, meetings, conventions, presentations and
news conferences;

Maintaining and operating the Broadcast and Recording
equipment in order to record, synchronize, mix, or reproduce music, voices, or
sound effects in recording studios, sporting arenas, theatre productions, or movie
and video productions;

Checking the sound quality of the link back to the studio
when covering outdoor events like football matches, political rallies and
cultural events.

Personal skills and Competences

Dates: 2005


www.painters.....com – Prepared and designed my father’s
website;

Dates: 2002


Submitting and presenting of my final year Project in
Management of Information Systems: LPro: A Linear Programming Language;

Dates: 2002


Submitting and presenting of my final year Project in
Business Administration: Senior Simulation in Business. This project represents
a computerised computer oriented management/marketing simulation which is used
to synthesize learning experiences analysing business problems, integrating the
study of accounting, economics, finance, management and marketing;

Dates: 1992 – 1993

xxx Disco – Designed and implemented the installation of the
audio equipment throughout the disco and providing technical support based on
immediate and future needs;

Dates: 1989 – 1993

MustFM Stereo – Designed, installed and operated an amateur
radio station which was covering a small area of about 30 miles. Producing a
variety of live programmes and some indoor “Studio Recordings”. Transmitting
these productions, around the clock.
  

Top answer

In addition to numerous threads in this forum, you can find free advice on how to write a good CV online. Just Google: "how to write a CV". I will tell you one thing right away which may help you when you repost here.

  • In addition to numerous threads in this forum, you can find free advice on how to write a good CV online.
  • Just Google: "how to write a CV".
  • I will tell you one thing right away which may help you when you repost here.
  • With the exception of describing the activities of your current job, a CV is always written in the past tense.
  • This CV indicates that you have been unengaged since April of 2011.
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In addition to numerous threads in this forum, you can find free advice on how to write a good CV online. Just Google: "how to write a CV".

I will tell you one thing right away which may help you when you repost here.

With the exception of describing the activities of your current job, a CV is always written in the past tense.

This CV indicates that you hav
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Good Evening John, you are always very helpful! Emotion: smile

My original, more detailed thread is here:

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