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Kedra Posted 20 years ago
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Please check the passage on grammar and style, thanks!
The below passage introduces a new feature. This text will be added to the web site section, dedicated to free file hosting and sharing. Because i am not native speaker, it's hard for me to define the inaccuracies, but I need to be sure, the text sounds ok. Thank you!
CompanyX is working hard to constantly improve the Service for its users.
Advanced Upload is the latest feature added to the Company X free file storage. It was created to speed up the upload of large files to our servers.
At the moment you use Standard Upload. You need to upload a file and then fill in the fields with your email, password, and file description. In other words, the upload is done with one click of a mouse, without filling in optional fields before the upload. The fields may even be left blank. No additional steps are needed.
However, the standard upload is not very convenient if you have to upload a large file. You have to get back to the web site regularly to check if your large file is fully uploaded to the server and you may enter your details. That’s why CompanyX comes up with Advanced Upload.
Advanced Upload allows you to enter all the necessary details (email, password, description) before the upload. Thus you do not have to constantly check the file uploading status to fill in the fields. Enter data, select a file and start uploading. No control from your side is required.
Dear Valued Users!
We thank you for leaving your comments and suggestions in our forum. We, at CompanyX, are trying to bring your ideas to life. Advanced Upload feature is a good evidence of it.
You help us serve you better!
CompanyX is working hard to constantly improve the Service for its users.
Advanced Upload is the latest feature added to the Company X free file storage. It was created to speed up the upload of large files to our servers.
At the moment you use Standard Upload. You need to upload a file and then fill in the fields with your email, password, and file description. In other words, the upload is done with one click of a mouse, without filling in optional fields before the upload. The fields may even be left blank. No additional steps are needed.
However, the standard upload is not very convenient if you have to upload a large file. You have to get back to the web site regularly to check if your large file is fully uploaded to the server and you may enter your details. That’s why CompanyX comes up with Advanced Upload.
Advanced Upload allows you to enter all the necessary details (email, password, description) before the upload. Thus you do not have to constantly check the file uploading status to fill in the fields. Enter data, select a file and start uploading. No control from your side is required.
Dear Valued Users!
We thank you for leaving your comments and suggestions in our forum. We, at CompanyX, are trying to bring your ideas to life. Advanced Upload feature is a good evidence of it.
You help us serve you better!
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As you will probably notice from below, I am not a native. The corrections are just for my own training. Sorry for the formatting, can't have tags work at this forum.
- As you will probably notice from below, I am not a native.
- The corrections are just for my own training.
- Sorry for the formatting, can't have tags work at this forum.
- «Advanced Upload is a new_ feature of our free file storage.
- » I think, you don't have to mention Company X since it is this company's site...
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As you will probably notice from below, I am not a native. The corrections are just for my own training. Sorry for the formatting, can't have tags work at this forum.
«Advanced Upload is a new_ feature of our free file storage. It _has_ _been created to speed up the upload of large files to our servers.»
«At the moment you use...»->
«In Standard Upload you...»
«Advanced Upload is a new_ feature of our free file storage. It _has_ _been created to speed up the upload of large files to our servers.»
«At the moment you use...»->
«In Standard Upload you...»
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