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Toffee apple Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please check the paragragh for me if there is any mistake.

A school can be scary and intimidating.Fitting in at school can seem overwhelming,but it does not have to be that way. Based on a research has made, we found that friendless is the main cause of students feel like they do not fit in at school. Therefore,coping with friends is the way in order to fit in at school.

Please do correct my mistake. In fact my english really poor. Thanks a lot Emotion: smile
  

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Hello toffee apple! toffee apple Based on a research has made , we found that ..... No offence, but from my opinion, your sentence seems a little bit incorrect, toffee apple.

— Red_Guitar_168

  • Hello toffee apple!
  • toffee apple Based on a research has made , we found that .....
  • No offence, but from my opinion, your sentence seems a little bit incorrect, toffee apple.
  • I guess, it would be OK if you had written it as " Based on a research that a researcher has made....
  • " Therefore, I'd prefer to omit that " has made " and rewrite it as follows : Based on a research, we have found that....
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Hello toffee apple!
toffee appleBased on a research has made, we found that .....
No offence, but from my opinion, your sentence seems a little bit incorrect, toffee apple. I guess, it would be OK if you had written it as "Based on a research that a researcher has made...."

Therefore, I'd prefer to omit that "has mad
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