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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

PLEASE CHECK THE INTRODUCTION OF THESE IELTS writing

-The given diagram illustrates the procedure of how a popular Snack is made and carry it to retail stores

- The given two pie charts show that men and women attained differing level of education in the United States from 1960 to 2010

- The given bar graph Shows How the time people of different ages spent watching TV and surf the internet in 2000 and 2010

  

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Please register with a username to get essay help. htm If you are writing about a graph, diagram, chart, table or map, please attach the image to your post. It is difficult to check your writing without the images.

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  • -The given diagram illustrates the procedure of how a popular S nack is made and carry it to retail stores (missing punctuation) - The given two pie charts show that men and women attained differing level of education in the United States from 1960 to 2010 (missing punctuation) - The given bar graph S hows How the time people of different ages spent watching TV and surf the internet in 2000 and 2010 (missing punctuation)
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