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Farhanullah Posted 11 years ago
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Please check the grammer of this eamil for me. I have to reply to a professor who just offered me to work in his lab.

Dear Prof. xyz,
Thank you for consideration my application. I have looked through the website and research papers you mentioned and I am greatly fascinated by your research work. The "research project" I sent you is actually my research plan for PhD study. However, if it is not feasible in your lab then I would love to work on oil crops functional genomics and comparative genomics analysis.
I am aware that working in your lab would not be easy but I can assure you, I am motivated to work hard for my PhD studies.
Thanks for your time, and I hope to hear from you soon!

Sincerely
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This is my approach: Thank you so much for your time and consideration on my application. I visited the website and studied research papers you (had) mentioned, and I am greatly fascinated by your research work. The "research project" I sent you is actually my research plan for PhD study.

  • This is my approach: Thank you so much for your time and consideration on my application.
  • I visited the website and studied research papers you (had) mentioned, and I am greatly fascinated by your research work.
  • The "research project" I sent you is actually my research plan for PhD study.
  • I hope you will find it applicable in your lab; if not I still will love to work on oil crops, functional genomics and comparative genomics analysis.
  • I can assure you, I am motivated to work hard for my PhD studies.
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This is my approach:
Thank you so much for your time and consideration on my application. I visited the website and studied research papers you (had) mentioned, and I am greatly fascinated by your research work. The "research project" I sent you is actually my research plan for PhD study. I hope you will fin
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I have looked through (look through mean reading in a quick and cursory, not serious manner) the website and research papers you mentioned and I am greatly fascinated by your research work

oil crops functional genomics - Are you sure you have this correct? What is an oil crop?
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AlpheccaStarsoil crops functional genomics - Are you sure you have this correct? What is an oil crop?
Plants that are used to produce vegetable oils.

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