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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Whether the television programmes are useful or detrimental for children has been a moot point among people.

Can I use this sentence as introduction of an essay?
  

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I suggest this. Whether television programmes are beneficial or detrimental for children has long been debated. Now state your opinion as a thesis sentence.

— Clive

  • I suggest this.
  • Whether television programmes are beneficial or detrimental for children has long been debated.
  • Now state your opinion as a thesis sentence.
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I suggest this.

Whether television programmes are beneficial or detrimental for children has long been debated.
Now state your opinion as a thesis sentence.
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Thanks a lot, Clive. Your suggestion is really helpful.
Please guide, if I can use below sample as the conclusion of the essay:

The epilogue of the missive can be inferred as .......
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No. The words epilogue, missive and infer do not fit there.
Find simpler terms.
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Can you please suggest how it could be written in an appropriate way?
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Restate your opinion about the topic, and briefly summarize why you think it is correct.
Use more than one sentence.
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