Please check the grammer

I am X from South Korea. I am planning to return on December 23rd 2006. Please inform me of the prodecure to get the return ticket.

As NP said, but I would change "get" to either purchase or acquire, depending on your meaning in this context. They seem to fit better with the formality, or formal tone, of your message.

<<I am X from South Korea. I am planning to return on December 23rd 2006. Please inform me of the prodecure to get the return ticket.>>

I am X from Sou

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I am X from S.Korea. I am planning to return on 23rd december 2006. so please inform the procedure to get the return ticket.

Thanks

I am X from South Korea. I am planning to return on 23 December 2006. Please inform me of the procedure to purchase/acquire the return ticket.

Milky, there is no need to change the wa

Of course, either will suffice.

MilkyOf course, either will suffice.

Thanks for the confirmation.

Hi,

I am X

When we give our name, we much more commonly and naturally say my name is X.

Best wishes, Clive