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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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On august 15, 2008 i had met my boy for the last time before I traveled to sweden ,it was only less than three hours in a special place called human rights building ,where the pepole who have got divours come there to meet their children.
According to my country law, after divorce ,children’s custody must be refer to the mother rathar than the father during first nine years of child age.
 He was in the third years old and I came every two week to saw him carrying a plaything as present to him.
Actually I was waitting the date of meeting day by day and I feel very happy when I see him every time .
At that day ,I have spent the last hour looking for som thing make him remember me for the next meeting because I know that he will can not see me again before at lest one years,so I tried to attracted his attention toward me from time to time.
As a child, he had a lovely nature so that everyone liked him at lest for the pepole who work there.
 I wished the three hours would never end. Som time he was looking at me strangely.
 While he had played with me, he fell in deep silent occasionally exact same as me ,he is look like me indeed and we have some common particulars.

 The worst of it was that I was feeling those three hours not enough to create strong relation between the son and his father,som time I read in his eyes som qustions like who am I ?or why he should brought here?,so I fell sad with frustration that to make him undrustand the meaning of fatherhood or why he have to see me.

Then ,at the last moment I was talking with him while hugged him and kissed him for the last time.
  

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You have 3 simple capitalization errors in your first line: On August 15, 2008 , I had met my boy for the last time before I traveled to Sweden Please proofread your essay yourself before posting it.

  • You have 3 simple capitalization errors in your first line: On August 15, 2008 , I had met my boy for the last time before I traveled to Sweden Please proofread your essay yourself before posting it.
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You have 3 simple capitalization errors in your first line:

On August 15, 2008, I had met my boy for the last time before I traveled to Sweden


Please proofread your essay yourself before posting it.
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