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Describe an activity you do for your health or fitness.

All girls wish to get into shape and i'm exception. I have taken up excercise yoga for 2 years, which takes me only 1 hour a day to become fit.

Honestly, i did always get a few aches and pains with my head. I have always feel omit and nausea because of vestibular disorders until i have come up to alternative forms of excercise such as yoga. Yoga allows me to work all parts of my body to get into shape. It enhances my flexibility and suppleness in every single movement.

Furthermore, unlike working out with gym, yoga is a low probability of injury. You will know how to relax your mind and breath exactly. One of the things that makes me keen on yoga that it is not only good for your physical well-being but also mental health because the excercises help to control the nerves. I do always feel fresh after completing each lesson.

Finally, thanks to join in yoga, my life has changed a lot. As a part of healthy lifestyle, i don't see myself stopping doing yoga anytime soon.

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Note: "i" means the 9th letter of the English alphabet. Are you talking about a letter getting into shape? Can letters do yoga?

Your essay has many errors. Please try to fix them and re-post the corrected version. If you have a question, please ask.

All girls wish to get into shape and i'm an exception. (This means that you are different. You do not want to get into shape. If you want to say the opposite, you need to use a different word than "an."

I have taken up excercise yoga for 2 years, which takes me only 1 hour a day to become (Wrong word) fit. (exercise yoga is not a good phrase..)

Honestly, i did always get a few aches and pains with my head. I have always feel omit and nausea because of vestibular disorders until i have come up to alternative forms of excercise such as yoga. Yoga allows me to work all parts of my body to get into shape. It enhances my flexibility and suppleness in every single movement.

Furthermore, unlike working out with gym, (Is Gym the name of a person who you work out with?) yoga is a low probability of injury. You will know how to relax your mind and breath (How do you relax your breath?) exactly. One of the things that makes me keen on yoga (missing word) that it is not only good for your physical well-being but also mental health because the excercises help to control the nerves. I do always feel fresh after completing each lesson.

Finally, thanks to join in yoga, my life has changed a lot. As a part of (missing word) healthy lifestyle, i don't see myself stopping doing yoga anytime soon.

Please check the grammar for me. Thank you.

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