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Muna tigeress Posted 5 years ago
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Finally my niece turned one. It is still vivid in memory when I saw your angelic face for the first time. You are the apple of my eye and I always cherish each and every moment that I have spend with you.
  

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muna tigeress Finally my niece turned one. That sounds like you were exasperated that she hadn't turned one before now, and the tense is wrong. Also, the switch from " my neice" to " your face" is puzzling, although we can address loved ones as "my" that way.

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  • muna tigeress Finally my niece turned one.
  • That sounds like you were exasperated that she hadn't turned one before now, and the tense is wrong.
  • Also, the switch from " my neice" to " your face" is puzzling, although we can address loved ones as "my" that way.
  • " muna tigeress It is still vivid in memory when I saw your angelic face for the first time.
  • The "when" clause is not a good fit with the dummy "it", and "when" is misleading.
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muna tigeressFinally my niece turned one.

That sounds like you were exasperated that she hadn't turned one before now, and the tense is wrong. Also, the switch from "my neice" to "your face" is puzzling, although we can address loved ones as "my" that way. I guess you mean "My sweet little niece has turned one."

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