Please check the grammar

I have to hand in the reports tomorrow. Could you please run a quick check through them? Thanks loads!!!

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When asked to make a sentence with When J~ , J will ~, Harry sometimes gets confused with the order of two events happening and forgets to add s after verbs when they are placed after a third person in the when- clause. Please remind him that When describes the moment as a block of time, if you prefer moment to be only 1 slice of time, then when describes a block of time relative to some event. For example, When the baseball player went up to bat, he struck out means the pitcher pitched to the player at the moment that he has gone to home plate. When asked to make sentences with does, did and will, he occasionally mismatches the modal verbs with wrong time adverbs. Please have him get into the habit of reading five minutes a day, as many as he can of the sentences in each tense that he wrote in his homework. We have been rehearsing the play for the graduation. I anticipate that they will demonstrate an incredible performance to do us proud!



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