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Grammar

Please check the following sentence and correct if anything is wrong.

Dear Teacher,

Please check the following sentence and correct if anything is wrong.

Thanks in advance

1.Currently/At present working on/in art creation.
2.Also doing new changes/enhancements which had/was already done.
3.Sent the documents for further clarification.
4.I am done with the requirements which you have been send/sent.
5.Please meet to discuss todays work and also the comming months programme/schedule.

Please do not ignore this .

Yours Faithfully
  

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Currently working in art creation. g. Also doing new changes/enhancements which had/was already done.

  • Currently working in art creation.
  • g.
  • Also doing new changes/enhancements which had/was already done.
  • There are too many words here, and they dont fit together very well.
  • I cannot guess what is it you want to do - so you need to tell us more about what you want this sentecne to achieve.
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1.Currently working in art creation.
(assuming this is for a cv or job application - it is note form and would need a verb in most cases, e.g. "I am ..."

2.Also doing new changes/enhancements which had/was already done.
There are too many words here, and they dont fit together very well. I cannot guess what is it you want to do - so you need to tell us more about what you w
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Thanks for your timely and prompt help.

I want to make clarify my second doubt more precisely.

1.Also doing new changes/enhancements which had already been done.

2.Also doing new enhancements which was already been done.

Thnks in advance

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