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Achu3186 Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Please check the correctness

We have done preliminary working in to your August file and need some clarification for some items which is same like what we have noticed yesterday with July file.
It would be great if you please send us the revised file and meantime please go through the attached file and revert back with your clarifications.
  

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This is not well-written, and the second sentence is very unclear. Do you perhaps mean this? Quote We need clarification of some items in your August file.

  • This is not well-written, and the second sentence is very unclear.
  • Do you perhaps mean this?
  • Quote We need clarification of some items in your August file.
  • The items involved are the same as those we discussed yesterday with regard to the July file.
  • Please send us a revised August file.
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This is not well-written, and the second sentence is very unclear.

Do you perhaps mean this?

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We need clarification of some items in your August file. The items involved are the same as those we discussed yesterday with regard to the July file. Please send us a revised August file.
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Thank you for your assistance.
This looks okay.

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