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Achu3186 Posted 10 years ago
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1. We have allocated below costs based on given criteria. Please let me know any changes required in variable cost allocation method.
2. Please advise us the methodology of agents wise allocation of the below costs which you have applied to your January to June reports.
2. Please advise us the methodology of agents wise allocation of the below costs which you have applied to your January to June reports.
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No. Your sentences, particularly #2, lean heavily on business jargon. Try to write as simply and clearly as you can.
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- Your sentences, particularly #2, lean heavily on business jargon.
- Try to write as simply and clearly as you can.
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No. Your sentences, particularly #2, lean heavily on business jargon. Try to write as simply and clearly as you can.
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1. We have allocated the costs below based on the criteria.shown. Please let us know of any changes required in this variable cost allocation method.
2. Please advise us of how you have allocated the agent costs which you applied to your January to June re
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1. We have allocated the costs below based on the criteria.shown. Please let us know of any changes required in this variable cost allocation method.
2. Please advise us of how you have allocated the agent costs which you applied to your January to June re
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