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Are these sentences well-structured for a combo movie description?

1. A must-watch, bone-chilling sagas with horrific mysteries and puts their lives in a rolling dice.
2. This ultimate scream collection includes two horror movies with nail-biting suspense, the Halloween and Saw. Stuck in your head for days!
3. Get ready for more spine-chilling suspense from the beginning to the shockingly terrifying ending, with Halloween and Saw. Do not watch alone!
4. A collection of heart-pumping horror flicks that focuses on the most terrifying evil’s in the world. Don’t challenge them.

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Blue Jay · Accepted Answer

Anonymous1. A must-watch, bone-chilling sagas with horrific mysteries and puts their lives in a rolling dice.

Sorry, this doesn't make sense to me.

Anonymous2. This ultimate scream collection includes two horror movies with nail-biting suspense, the Halloween and Saw. Stuck in your head for days!

The last part doesn't work. You could say They'll be stuck in your head for days.
If the name of the movie is "The Halloween", capitalize the T in The. If the name is just "Halloween", you should omit the.

Anonymous3. Get ready for more spine-chilling suspense, from the beginnings to the shockingly terrifying endings, with Halloween and Saw. Do not watch alone!

Anonymous4. A collection of heart-pumping horror flicks that focuses on the most terrifying evils in the world. Don’t challenge them.

You don't need an apostrophe when you add s on the end of a word to form a plural. An apostrophe before an s like that means belonging to.
The boys were playing with a ball. (More than one boy)
The man's car was blue. (The car belonging to the man)

Don't challenge them doesn't make much sense here. Who or what is meant by them?

Anonymous · Answer

Thank you. well noted.

Don't challenge them: "Them" I'm referring to the evils actually.

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