0
Achu3186 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Please check the correctness

Dear Sir,
As you aware that I was been in a medical treatment on last month from my home country.
After my treatment I have submitted my sick leave to HR department. But unfortunately 6 days has been rejected by HR due to missing of proper medical details attachment from hospital.
Therefore I kindly request you to deduct this 6 days (24.10.2015 -29.10.2015) from my next year annual leave instead of treating as unpaid leave.
Your kind consideration will be highly appreciated.
  

Top answer

2015) from my next year’s annual leave, instead of treating them as unpaid leave. ”

  • 2015) from my next year’s annual leave, instead of treating them as unpaid leave.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

1 Answers
0
Suggestions:
“As you are aware, that I was been in a receiving medical treatment in my home country.” (I am assuming it was performed at a hospital within that country.)
“After my treatment, I have submitted my sick leave request/report to HR Department; but unfortunately 6 days have been rejected by HR due to

Related Questions