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Achu3186 Posted 11 years ago
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I completely agree with your question. I should have informed you earlier regarding this matter. But unfortunately I didn’t.
I know very well about your concerns about me. But I am really sorry to inform you that I don’t wish to change my decision.
Because I already set my mind to leave the team. My future plans has not been decided yet but whilst I have committed to a team for their Sunday tournament matches.
I wish you all the best for your upcoming matches. My all support and prayers are with you always.
  

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1) To ‘agree with your question’ is unusual: A question is open to a response rather than agreement. The conjunction ‘but’ should follow a semi-colon after ‘matter’. 2) Again, either use ‘but’ as a conjunction or omit it if using two sentences.

— Wilpeter

  • 1) To ‘agree with your question’ is unusual: A question is open to a response rather than agreement.
  • The conjunction ‘but’ should follow a semi-colon after ‘matter’.
  • 2) Again, either use ‘but’ as a conjunction or omit it if using two sentences.
  • 3) The meaning is uncertain, due to having conflicting conditions.
  • ’ 4) Two sentences are fine but the word ‘all’ in the second sentence should be omitted.
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1) To ‘agree with your question’ is unusual: A question is open to a response rather than agreement. The conjunction ‘but’ should follow a semi-colon after ‘matter’.
2) Again, either use ‘but’ as a conjunction or omit it if using two sentences.
3) The meaning is uncertain, due to having conflicting conditions. It would make a long sentence, but the main sentence is ‘My future plans
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