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Achu3186 Posted 12 years ago
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Hope you all are received CRP game schedule and Rules. All are requested to go thru the rule and regulations provided by game authority. Guys, I just want to highlight that this would be a memorable event for those who attended the days.
Company proving T-shirt for participants and this will be distribute by Today’s evening.We have registered with 2 teams for this season. All the matches will be played with 7 side.I have received participation interest from below stated names.So kindly reconfirm your availability for the game days. Then only I can make 2 teams for the participation.
  

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Here is my corrected version: I hope you have all received the CRP game schedule and rules. Please go through the rules and regulations provided by the game authority. This will be a memorable event for those attending.

  • Here is my corrected version: I hope you have all received the CRP game schedule and rules.
  • Please go through the rules and regulations provided by the game authority.
  • This will be a memorable event for those attending.
  • The t-shirts for participants will be distributed by this evening.
  • We will register 2 teams this season, and the matches will be 7-a-side.
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Here is my corrected version:

I hope you have all received the CRP game schedule and rules. Please go through the rules and regulations provided by the game authority. This will be a memorable event for those attending.
The t-shirts for participants will be distributed by this evening. We will register 2 teams this season, and the matches will be 7-a-side. Below is a list of people wh

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