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Achu3186 Posted 12 years ago
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Dear Sir,
I am a Tenant from #Apartment 208. Last night I have visited the Gymnasium which is provided by you in the same building.
But I could see all the equipment conditions were very bad (All treadmills are not working, Weight machines ropes are broken etc) .
I couldn’t use any single equipment from there except 1 cycle.
You have promised Gymnasium facilities when we are booking the Apartment.
So we are kindly request to you to provide the required maintenance/Repair on the equipment. So we can use the facilities properly
Your kind consideration will be appreciated.
  

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achu3186 Dear Sir,I am a Tenant from #Apartment 208. But I could see all the equipment conditions were very bad (All treadmills are not working, Weight machines ropes are broken etc) . You have promised Gymnasium facilities when we are booking the Apartment.

  • achu3186 Dear Sir,I am a Tenant from #Apartment 208.
  • But I could see all the equipment conditions were very bad (All treadmills are not working, Weight machines ropes are broken etc) .
  • You have promised Gymnasium facilities when we are booking the Apartment.
  • So we are kindly request to you to provide the required maintenance/Repair on the equipment .
  • So we can use the facilities properlyYour kind consideration will be appreciated.
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achu3186 Dear Sir,I am a Tenant from #Apartment 208. Last night I have visited the Gymnasium which is provided by you in the same building.But I could see all the equipment conditions were very bad (All treadmills are not working, Weight ma
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