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Araselvan Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Please check the article in the senteces.

The External Communication (EC) Platform Governance team had approved the POWRSCAN application project for High Level Planning.

Int the above sentence, should it be
a) the High Level Planning
b) High Level Planning
  

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I can't exactly be sure what the sentence is supposed to mean. "the POWRSCAN application project" sounds like a project to develop the POWRSCAN application. Is that what you mean?

  • I can't exactly be sure what the sentence is supposed to mean.
  • "the POWRSCAN application project" sounds like a project to develop the POWRSCAN application.
  • Is that what you mean?
  • Or could you actually delete the word "project"?
  • Is "the POWRSCAN application project for High Level Planning" the name of the application (which includes a description of its purpose), or do you mean that something called "POWRSCAN" has been approved for high level planning?
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I can't exactly be sure what the sentence is supposed to mean.

"the POWRSCAN application project" sounds like a project to develop the POWRSCAN application. Is that what you mean? Or could you actually delete the word "project"?

Is "the POWRSCAN application project for High Level Planning" the name of the application (which includes a description of its purpose), or do you mean t
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I meant to say Replacement of POWRSCAN Application Project. My revised sentence and question is below.

The External Communication (EC) Platform Governance team had approved the Replacement of POWRSCAN application project for High Level Planning.
Int the above sentence, should it be
a) the High Level Planning
b) High Level Planning

Thank you.
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araselvanThe External Communication (EC) Platform Governance team had approved the Replacement of POWRSCAN application project for High Level Planning.Int the above sentence, should it bea) the High Level Planningb) High Level Planning
First, there seem to be too many capital letters, which usually adds confusion anyway. I read it this way. 'Project' (counta
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High Level Planning in the above sentence in the name of the phase of the project and the second phase in our project life cycle. With that said, do we need to treat High Level Planning as countable or uncountable.

If it is countable, will we need the?
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I hold tight to my initial corrections.
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I still find the sentence quite hard to understand (though admittedly it may be easier for someone familiar with the background context). Do you mean that there is a project to replace POWRSCAN, and that this project has been approved to go to the high level planning stage? Or is the POWRSCAN application itself used for high level planning?

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