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Brentlopez001 Posted 12 years ago
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Please advise the status of the payment for our order from Ali & Sons Trading as per the attached invoice for them to be able to deliver the items the soonest.
  

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The last part does not work well. I suggest this. eg Please advise the status of the payment for our order from Ali & Sons Trading as per the attached invoice.

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  • The last part does not work well.
  • I suggest this.
  • eg Please advise the status of the payment for our order from Ali & Sons Trading as per the attached invoice.
  • For them to be able to deliver the items as soon as possible, they require payment in advance.
  • Is this what you mean?
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The last part does not work well. I suggest this.
eg Please advise the status of the payment for our order from Ali & Sons Trading as per the attached invoice. For them to be able to deliver the items as soon as possible, they require payment in advance.

Is this what you mean?
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Yes Sir, perfect!
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