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Brentlopez001 Posted 13 years ago
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Please be informed that I will be leaving on Friday, 16th August 2013 for my annual vacation and will return on 1st September. Any issues relating to IT department can be coordinated with the below personnel:

P1 - Mr. Steve
P2 - Mr. Thomas
P3 - Mr. Jack

I will be checking my emails infrequently, so should you need anything urgently, please don't hesitate to contact me on my mobile.

Thank you.
  

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'Please be informed' is one of the worst examples of non-informational blabber that has ever been invented. You should not clutter dates up with the year when the year is obvious. Using 'Mr/Ms' with first names is a practice limited to elementary school students: you should use the first name alone or the surname instead: 'Steve' or 'Mr Smith'.

— Mister Micawber

  • 'Please be informed' is one of the worst examples of non-informational blabber that has ever been invented.
  • You should not clutter dates up with the year when the year is obvious.
  • Using 'Mr/Ms' with first names is a practice limited to elementary school students: you should use the first name alone or the surname instead: 'Steve' or 'Mr Smith'.
  • I will be leaving on Friday, August 16th, for my annual vacation and will return on September 1st.
  • Any issues for the IT department can be taken to these personnel: P1—Steve P2—Thomas P3—Jack I will be checking my emails infrequently, so should you need anything urgently, please contact me on my mobile.
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'Please be informed' is one of the worst examples of non-informational blabber that has ever been invented. You should not clutter dates up with the year when the year is obvious. Using 'Mr/Ms' with first names is a practice limited to elementary school students: you should use the first name alone or the surname instead: 'Steve' or 'Mr Smith'.

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