Please check task 2 ielts (bar chart)

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Topic: The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each category from five organisations.

The bar chart compares how much money is spent on 5 different categories by 5 variety of organizations.

Overall, it can be seen that organization B spends a higher budget on these categories compared to the others, while organization D and E invest the least. In addition, The spending of organization C concentrates on Research and Machinery rather than Building and Staff training as the remaining ones.

Looking at organizations A and B, organization B invests the highest amount of money on Staff training, at 1.9 billion euros, which was about 5 and 3 billion euros higher than in comparison with that of building and research. Meanwhile, the largest amount of money is spent on the building by organization A, at 1.5 billion euros. And both organizations A and B spend the least amount of money on Machinery, at 1 and 0.9 billion euros respectively.

Turning to organizations D and E, there was an equal budget of expenditure on Building with 1 billion euros and the least spending on Research was 0.6 and 0.7 billion euros in organizations D and E respectively. Furthermore, organization C allocates 1.5 billion euros on both Research and Machinery while the other organizations have less investment with these categories.

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The bar chart compares how much money is spent (Wrong word. Spending is different from investing. They are not close synonyms. ) on 5 (wrong word. Also, spell out small numbers that are not data values.) different categories by 5 variety (Wrong word.) of organizations. (What are the categories?)

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The bar chart compares investments by five different organizations, broken down into four categories. Two categories are long-term capital assets, buildings and machinery, and the other two are human capital, research and staff training. The organizations are not named; they are designated A, B, C, D and E.

Overall, it can be seen that organization B spends a higher budget (wrong word. Budget is not money. A budget is a list of items that money is spent on in a period of time..) on these categories compared to the others, while organization D and E invest the least. In addition, The spending of organization C concentrates on Research and Machinery rather than Building and Staff training as the remaining ones.

Looking at organizations A and B, organization B invests the highest amount of money on Staff training, at 1.9 billion euros, which was about 5 and 3 billion euros higher (not a good expression) than in comparison with that of building and research. Meanwhile, the largest amount of money is spent on buildings ~~the building~~ by organization A, at 1.5 billion euros. And both organizations A and B spend the least amount of money on Machinery, at 1 and 0.9 billion euros respectively.

Turning to organizations D and E, there was an equal budget of expenditure on Building with 1 billion euros and the least spending on Research was 0.6 and 0.7 billion euros in organizations D and E respectively. Furthermore, organization C allocates 1.5 billion euros on both Research and Machinery while the other organizations have less investment in ~~with~~ these categories.

This is not a good essay topic. It is unclear what the time frame for these investments are. If it said "annual budget" it would be much better.

Budget

This is a budget worksheet for students. When the numbers are filled in the cells, it becomes a budget. We do not spend budget. We allocate our money to budget categories. If we stick to our budget, it helps us manage our money. Each month, I budget $250 for food. (This means I write $250 in the "monthly food" category.)

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