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Hi there. im sorry for my bad English in this. i'm trying to get into the Disney program to be a cultural representative at a park and had to write this short essay explaining why I would be the best candidate to represent my country, India. please look over and fix any grammatical errors or punctuation errors that you see! it will be greatly appreciated, thank you!

> Being an Indian i have had the privilege to live in the multilingual,
> multicultural and multireligious sorrundings.Though there is ample
> amount of diversity, still the people live with brotherhood .The unity
> in diversity is as a result of various bonds which have developed in
> the past such as the national langauge and the national culture, a
> excellent national constitution. I am able to read, write and speak
> the national language Hindi which has always helped me to take a sneak
> peak into the varied cultural zones of India. I am a keen listener,
> observer, reader which has always widened the horizon of my knowledge
> regarding customs, norms, traditions of India. Moreover the idea of
> exploring more and more of my homeland took me to various distinct
> places and as a result i have travelled almost whole of India
> starting from himalayas in the north to the beaches in the south,
> visiting places of cultural and historical importance. My hometown is
> situated in the state of Punjab, in the northern region of India which
> has developed into a hub of cultural mix, due to the infrastructural
> development thereby generating more and more jobs and educational
> facilities, thus leading people from all over the country to come
> here thereby enhancing my knowledge on the cultural heritage of
> India.On roads and at various public one can easily notice people from
> diverse cultures of India . The Chitkara University from where i
> graduated i had my batchmates who came from every nook and corner of
> India and studying with them gave me a blend of whole of India. We
> celebrated each others festivals together with immense pleasure and
> joy, which always increased my hold on cultural aspects. Whenever we
> had get togathers we did everything in traditional aspect starting
> from the dress attires, food, music which helped to learn the new
> shades of incredible India. I also have thorough knowledge of major
> religious sects, religious places and their significance.The dance
> and music have always invited my attention since childhood and the
> result is i learned the folk dance form bhangra.The music and
> various art forms of India provide a positive vibe to my personality.
> Whenever i have got a chance i have attended various religious and
> cultural fairs to indepth my hold on Indian culture.On my post as a
> cultural representative at disney, it will provide me a platform by
> which i will be able to pay a token of gratitude to my motherland for
> whatever it has provided me with.As i have already been to disney it
> will make my work easier because the work environment is familiar.
> During my earlier visit,i was flattered by the hospitality of disney.
> The senior staff was very helpful and cooperative which made the work
> highly enjoyable and a fun play. The guidance to work and peacefull
> work environment helped me to fetch 4 guest fanatic cards.Being well
> versed in English language i will be able to explain my culture to the
> guests of disney in much familiar way.I really miss disney from the
> bottom of my heart and i am hopeful that this opportuniity will be a
> great experience for rest of my life.In this era of globalisation my
> skills to speak, live and enjoy globalised culture and simultaneously
> my knowledge and hold on my own culture will help me to do justice to
> my role of a cultural represenative of india and will surely bring the
> best results for both disney and me.