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Summer23 Posted 20 years ago
Business & Finance
please check real quick the grammar of my application !!
(This text is my application letter for my internship application, can you read quick over it and point out the possible mistakes to me? thanks for the help)
Dear .....,
We emailed one year ago, I put my previous emails together for you to remind you of our chat.
Further down you can read some of them. I applied for an internship and you were my contact partner.
After a discussion with .... you decided not to take students for an internship in 2006 at you company.
Today, after a year, I want to try again and apply for the position of a 2007 internship for the duration of
six weeks to three months. I'm available on semester holidays from 5. March until 13. May or 5. August until 10. Octobre.
In that time, I would come to L.A., rent a room and hopefully work at .....
I'm still very enthusiastic about it and look forward to meet ..... whom I only hear on mp3, to meet
the others in real life, to invest my knowledge and ambition in the company and to enjoy my first
internship in the USA.
In the attachment you will find a recent photo of mine and the resume.
Thank you for the time you take to read and hopefully till later.
Dear .....,
We emailed one year ago, I put my previous emails together for you to remind you of our chat.
Further down you can read some of them. I applied for an internship and you were my contact partner.
After a discussion with .... you decided not to take students for an internship in 2006 at you company.
Today, after a year, I want to try again and apply for the position of a 2007 internship for the duration of
six weeks to three months. I'm available on semester holidays from 5. March until 13. May or 5. August until 10. Octobre.
In that time, I would come to L.A., rent a room and hopefully work at .....
I'm still very enthusiastic about it and look forward to meet ..... whom I only hear on mp3, to meet
the others in real life, to invest my knowledge and ambition in the company and to enjoy my first
internship in the USA.
In the attachment you will find a recent photo of mine and the resume.
Thank you for the time you take to read and hopefully till later.
Top answer
The possible mistakes are underscored: Dear ..... , We emailed one year ago, I put my previous emails together for you to remind you of our chat. Further down you can read some of them.
- The possible mistakes are underscored: Dear .....
- , We emailed one year ago, I put my previous emails together for you to remind you of our chat.
- Further down you can read some of them.
- I applied for an internship and you were my contact partner.
- After a discussion with ....
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The possible mistakes are underscored:
Dear .....,
We emailed one year ago, I put my previous emails together for you to remind you of our chat.
Further down you can read some of them. I applied for an internship and you were my contact partner.
After a discussion with .... you decided not to take students for an internship in 2006 at
Dear .....,
We emailed one year ago, I put my previous emails together for you to remind you of our chat.
Further down you can read some of them. I applied for an internship and you were my contact partner.
After a discussion with .... you decided not to take students for an internship in 2006 at
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Thank you for pointing out the possible mistakes,
I put my question a little wrong, can somebody write the text how it would be right?
I cannot correct it by myself ...
Thx
I put my question a little wrong, can somebody write the text how it would be right?
I cannot correct it by myself ...
Thx
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can somebody write the textNot I. You'll never learn if you don't try it yourself.
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I understand you fully, and I am willing to learn, but I just don't want to experiment with my application,
because the job is very important to me.
Then again I would need somebody to correct the new text I wrote and for this I don't have time either,
cause I need to send it real quick, even with the mistakes ...
I still hope somebody can do me the favour!
because the job is very important to me.
Then again I would need somebody to correct the new text I wrote and for this I don't have time either,
cause I need to send it real quick, even with the mistakes ...
I still hope somebody can do me the favour!
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