Hi Ben, others might have different ideas but here is what I think could be done to improve the letter with minimum change to the content: Dear ABC Building Accountant, The autopay instruction of my account has been confirmed effective with bank of UTX on 18 Nov 2005. I have paid my management fee for the month of November on 14 Nov 2005. Payment of management fee for December has been transferred to ABC building's account on 1 Dec 2005.
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