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When I woke up, it took a while for the room to stop moving. Mick stood over me, white gloves on
his hands. My hands and feet were tied to a chair. There was a white table with a white table cloth
over it and silves knives stack neatly, a scalpel gleamed in the soft light.

"Good, you're awake. I was afraid I'd have to start without you being conscious. The boys had to
leave. They don't have the stomach for another of my little operations, beside they have to get
rid of Jake's body." He walked to the table and picked up a knife.
  

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Sounds like a good plot for a horror movie. silves --> silver stack... --> stacked (maybe arranged) neatly on it; (semicolon) without you --> without your (possessive is a little better; it emphaizes the state of consciousness) beside--> besides,

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  • Sounds like a good plot for a horror movie.
  • silves --> silver stack...
  • --> stacked (maybe arranged) neatly on it; (semicolon) without you --> without your (possessive is a little better; it emphaizes the state of consciousness) beside--> besides,
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Sounds like a good plot for a horror movie.
silves --> silver
stack... --> stacked (maybe arranged) neatly on it; (semicolon)
without you --> without your (possessive is a little better; it emphaizes the state of consciousness)
beside--> besides,
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