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THE SCOUNDREL
The persecution has begun
Don't worry there won't be weapons
Only revolts and quarrels
And a little mocking.
You can't tolerate what I've become
Or the manifestation growing
Inside of my feverish host
You can't escape the dread -
As your dwelling I have become
You can run into the streets
But thee shall cross the develish needs -
Of the sweetheart that'd become the werewolf
Whose sharp claws and canines shall -
Rip your skin and bones
Shattering your heart into a million-
Broken pieces that is never to be -
Fixed.
For the little innocent child have become-
The scoundrel.
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I'll comment on a detail. If you use an archaic word like "thee," you should know its use, so I'll provide it for you. "Thee" is an object of the verb, while "thou" is a subject.
- I'll comment on a detail.
- If you use an archaic word like "thee," you should know its use, so I'll provide it for you.
- "Thee" is an object of the verb, while "thou" is a subject.
- You should use "thou" rather than "thee" in your poem.
- I only mention it because you chose to suddenly use that form.
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I'll comment on a detail. If you use an archaic word like "thee," you should know its use, so I'll provide it for you. "Thee" is an object of the verb, while "thou" is a subject. You should use "thou" rather than "thee" in your poem. I only mention it because you chose to suddenly use that form. I don't think you should use it unless you change all the mentions of the word "you" to the archaic
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