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- the effect of technology

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(Introduction)

Technology is a wide place where in fact the word technology comes from the meaning of art, skill, and craft. To tell you the truth technology had cross over mind of people since the past to the current present. Where many people and inventors died but their inventions still alive and remember their name as the best of the peoples had helped the world to make it a better place , in particularly who does don’t know Thomas Edison ? Who does don’t know about bill gates? In this essay I will handle about causes and effects of how the technology changed our life’s.

(Case 1)

For the simple reason that since many years ago maybe a decade, people has been using fire almost all their life’s. Thomas Edison this person were been work all over his life to create and make creative machines and small projects since he was a boy, when he entirely get over many years and been a grown man, Thomas Edison had create inventors which made people amazed by what did they see which for an example he invent the light and electricity and many other invention and that changed the way of technology a lot.

(Case 2)

Who does not have a phone these days? How does not use any of them?! , the technology has been changing in many methods before they get used to be alive without the necessary or needed stuff like a telephone which it will lead us to the man who did create one of the famous inventions in the world, he is known by his name alexander graham one of the most nobles people in the world and the invention made him very famous across the universe and this a view of what technology has been creating since the past.

(Case 3)

Due to the fact from find the gas to the petrol to the job of creating the tires , to the fact of create a car and transport resource…where in the previous year’s people couldn’t travel or move to another city unless they were in the sea or by a horse and moreover a camel , so somehow it was difficult to be move around like here and there since hennery ford was born , this man was known as the creator of automobile manufacturing and cars , since he made his first powered gas car , that was a big move throw the technology .

(Effect 1)

As a result of create or invest the light, that now the life is much easier and better, where you can find everywhere are using the light bulb such as schools, hospitals, and hoses where each single person at the time must be using one kind of devices and that will lead us to the work of the inventor of the light and electricity Thomas Edison, it did really changed our whole routine of life and make us feel anything can be done.

(Effect 2)

Because of the telephone, now people don’t have to be afraid whenever they go to anywhere, they can contact everyone by calling them even though by the current phones they let u see the one your talk with, so probably that a big difference of change in technology and on people, it effect the people who work or the people who are actually sick and can’t walk around so it was actually very important technology that has been improve over the past decades.

(Effect 3)

thus that was a forward point throw it successes henry ford did change life for all of us, before there were no cars no transport resource and people only has been used animals like horse or camel to pass throw from city to another and it was a hard way to travel by the sea, so accordingly to this car has made and invention by henry ford and it make a great change on the people life and it did effected them a lot in a good way.

(Conclusion)

as a final point , technology has made a huge difference and change throw our life’s , from worse to a better way of using devices and the daily use of the inventions , at least now everyone do what he want in easy way