"According to the bar graph, the percentage of CO2 emission from road transport had steady increase from 1980 to 2013, while that of CO2 emission from other transport showed stable decrease from 11.9% to 1 %.
During the years, there had been the least changes in the percentage of CO2 emissions from other sectors by only o.4 percent points, followed by manufacturing, construction and energy industry sector by 0.6 percent points.
When we look at the changes of residential sector, the percentage of CO2 emission from it decreased from 35.2% to 10.8 % between 1908 and 2000. However it increased from then until 2013 by 1.6 percent points.
In 2013, manufacturing, construction, energy industry and road transport account for nearly three quarters of total CO2 emission while the others a quarter."
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