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Mr1bin Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Please check my wrong grammar.
My life online
I do many things online Emailing, net surfing, playing games, shopping, studying as well as social networking. One thing I like to do is play online games. It is really fun because I can play with many other people. I can also make friends there. It is addictive too, because the more I play the game, the more items I will get. Another thing I like is shopping online. It is usually cheaper than local shops. I can check the pictures and buy things without visiting the local shops. The last thing I like to do is study online. There are many informative lectures and it is very easy to study. Even if I miss what the teacher said, I can simply replay it.
Thank you : )
I do many things online Emailing, net surfing, playing games, shopping, studying as well as social networking. One thing I like to do is play online games. It is really fun because I can play with many other people. I can also make friends there. It is addictive too, because the more I play the game, the more items I will get. Another thing I like is shopping online. It is usually cheaper than local shops. I can check the pictures and buy things without visiting the local shops. The last thing I like to do is study online. There are many informative lectures and it is very easy to study. Even if I miss what the teacher said, I can simply replay it.
Thank you : )
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My life online I do many things online such as e mailing, net surfing, playing games, shopping, studying and social networking. One thing I like is to play online games. It is really fun because I can play with many other people.
- My life online I do many things online such as e mailing, net surfing, playing games, shopping, studying and social networking.
- One thing I like is to play online games.
- It is really fun because I can play with many other people.
- I can also make friends there.
- It is addictive too, because the more I play the game, the more items I will get.
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My life online
I do many things online such as emailing, net surfing, playing games, shopping, studying and social networking. One thing I like is to play online games. It is really fun because I can play with many other people. I can also make friends there. It is addictive too, because the more I play the game, the more items I will get. Another thing I lik
I do many things online such as emailing, net surfing, playing games, shopping, studying and social networking. One thing I like is to play online games. It is really fun because I can play with many other people. I can also make friends there. It is addictive too, because the more I play the game, the more items I will get. Another thing I lik
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Hey there mr1bin,
I think your grammar is fine in these sentences. They are simple sentences but are grammatically correct. The only correction I would make is to the sentence where you mention:
I think your grammar is fine in these sentences. They are simple sentences but are grammatically correct. The only correction I would make is to the sentence where you mention:
mr1binThe last thing I like to do is study online.At least in American English, when you say the last thing thing I like to dore
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Thank you for your answering. But I alrealy mentioned "Another thing" once. I heard that repeating same words are not good. What do you think?
Or also, Another thing I like to do is to study online.
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