Please check my writting

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-What dit they do at eleven p.m last night it was so noisy-I bought this coat in2009, but it is still fashionable-My grandmother was making breakfast while my grandfather were doing the gradening-The twins were shispering about their toys while their parents were watching TV-My sister was taught me English when we notice someone enter our house-We was met Jack and Rosy on our way home from school yesterday.-I was eight years old when my elder sister taught me how to ride a bike.John did not go to school last week because he was ill. I did not know anything about the plane crash in my neighborhood because i  work inside at that time.

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green lime 761: Please check my writting

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Do not run all your sentences together. Put each sentence on one line.

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-What dit they do at eleven p.m last night (You need to add punctuation at the end of the sentence.)

it was so noisy (You need to add punctuation at the end of the sentence.)

-I bought this coat in2009, but it is still fashionable (You need to add punctuation at the end of the sentence.)

- My grandmother was making breakfast while my grandfather were doing the gradening

(You need to add punctuation at the end of the sentence.)

- The twins were shispering about their toys while their parents were watching TV (You need to add punctuation at the end of the sentence.)

- My sister was taught me English when we notice someone enter our house (You need to add punctuation at the end of the sentence.)

- We was met Jack and Rosy on our way home from school yesterday.

- I was eight years old when my elder sister taught me how to ride a bike.

John did not go to school last week because he was ill.

I did not know anything about the plane crash in my neighborhood because i work inside at that time.

Please check my writting

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