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Phamthuylinh2003 Posted 4 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please check my writing, thanks in advance! (Barron's Essential words for the IELTS - Task writing in page 17)

Deforestation is a serious problem happening in many parts of the world, due to human activity. To lessen the shortage of plants, even though it is hard to put into practice, we can still try to do some small activities with huge meaning.

There are many solutions based on the 3R principle that suit our ability. You can reduce buying paper products as much as possible to cut down on unnecessary usings. Instead, you should use products made from other materials as an alternative effectively. With this solution, your attempt on lessening the deforestation will be added up to solve this problem.

Beside reducing buying unnecessary products of paper, we could reclaim used paper products, by consuming it as tissues and napkins, or making handmade products from paper instead of throwing them. Unless it still provides benefits, you should put it in the bin for paper. This is the final process of utilizing paper, we should recycle paper trash to consume it thoroughly, and save the environment from a variety of pollutants caused by paper rubbish.

These are some solutions to protect the plant from logging that we could do. Although, each of them is not the most effective choice, we should try to do it. Because together we can change the world, our activities will produce benefits for reducing the lack of trees.

  

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