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I’m Quan 23 years old. I was born and grow up in Vietnam where is a beautiful place and friendly people. I study Management Information System at University Economics and Law. My hobby is playing games and writing. Further, I also like to study English because I want to travel in the world. My character is so dynamic and imaginative because I don’t stay in one place. I want to become a food travel blog. My idol is “Tran Dang Dang Khoa” who the first travel around in the world with a motorbike. I always discover everything with a motorbike. To finish my dream, so I begin to study English in early 2021. First, I study IPA on YouTuBe. Second, I practice listening to VOA learning English. I always write 500 words in the evening every day. My job is an ERP consultant and I work in Ho Chi Minh city.

In the future, I want to change my job and become a freelancer. Thus, I study an extra design course, edit video and content writing. I know ahead road very difficult, but I remember my idol addressed “If you want, you pursue it until success ”. He inspired my effort.