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The bar chart compares the percentage change of overseas student that graduated from eight different provinces in Canada from 2001 to 2006.

Overall, the percentage of graduate students considerably increased between this period except graduate students in Alberta. New Brunswick had the highest percentage of graduations in five years and British Columbia was the second one.

In 2001, the percentage of students who graduated in eight provinces ranged from 3% to 7%. the graduate students in New Brunswick had the most proportion, about 7% and it increased to approximately 12% in 2006. The percentage of graduate students in British Columbia started at almost 5% and rose by 6 %, reached 11% at the end of five years. It had the most growth between eight provinces.

In 2001, the percentage of student graduation from Alberta was about 6%, it fell by almost 2% and reached to the lowest proportion in 2006, about4%.