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The table provides some background information about importance of external and internal communication in worker between 1997 and 2006.

Overall, the percentage of all skills except selling a product or service increased during nine years, showing that people fully understand the importance of skills in 2006.

The highest percentage of people in both years said that dealing with people skill was essential. It was necessary for 60% of people in 1997 and 65% of people in 2006. The second external requisite skill was advising or caring for customers or clients, 35% in 1997 and increased by 6% in 2006. The lowest external essential skill was related to selling a product or service skill that decreased by 3% and reached 21%.

In 2006, 47% of people said the internal essential skill was listening carefully to colleagues, which was nine percent higher than the one for 1997. Although making speeches or presentation increased by 4%, it was the lowest percentage during the same period.

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The table provides some background information about importance of external and internal communication in worker between 1997 and 2006.

Overall, the percentage of all skills except selling a product or service increased during nine years, showing that people fully understand the importance of skills in 2006.

The highest percentage of people in both years said that dealing with people skill was essential. It was necessary for 60% of people in 1997 and 65% of people in 2006. The second external requisite skill was advising or caring for customers or clients, 35% in 1997 and increased by 6% in 2006. The lowest external essential skill was related to selling a product or service skill that decreased by 3% and reached 21%.

In 2006, 47% of people said the internal essential skill was listening carefully to colleagues, which was nine percent higher than the one for 1997. Although making speeches or presentation increased by 4%, it was the lowest percentage during the same period.

Overall, the percentage of all skills except selling a product or service increased during (wrong word. You do not have data for the years in between these endpoints) nine years, showing that people fully understand (That is an inference, opinion or conclusion. It is essential not to write these things in Task 1. In Task 1, you describe the information as it is presented, without any conclusions.) the importance of skills in 2006.

The highest percentage of people in both years said that dealing with people skill was essential. It was necessary for 60% of people in 1997 and 65% of people in 2006. The second external requisite skill was advising or caring for customers or clients, 35% in 1997 and increased by 6% in 2006. The lowest external essential skill was related to selling a product or service skill that decreased by 3% and reached 21%.

In 2006, 47% of people said the internal essential skill was listening carefully to colleagues, which was nine percent higher than the one for 1997. Although making speeches or presentation increased by 4%, it was the lowest percentage during the same period. (wrong word. You do not have data for the years in between these endpoints)

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