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Some people believe that it is better to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such a situation.

It is argued that people should accept some bad situations such as an unsatisfied woke or money. However, in my opinion, I believed that it is necessary to handle this situation.

On the one hand, there are various reasons why people tend to accept negative circumstances. First, some people who have a child do not have a chance to change their condition even when they are not satisfied. For example, it is necessary for them to spend more time taking care of family and kids rather than doing jobs, which accept unsatisfied work or wrong jobs. Second, some people believe that it is not a situation that they are not able to bear. As the consequence, they agree with this to ensure peace and try to avoid disruption among members of the group.

On the other hand, I strongly believe that people should fight to tackle the problems above. Firstly, in terms of individuals, it is increasingly bored when in the unsatisfactory circumstances, there is no room for them to create and develop, which they are able to raise their personal profile and contribute to the society. Secondly, it is obvious that society will go back if people accept a bad situation and satisfy with the present. There are no more inventions or any scientific advances that were invented. For example, if Jack Ma accepted to only become a teacher and did not change, he would have not succeeded and become a billionaire with the popularity of Alibaba.

In conclusion, although some believe that it is necessary to accept bad circumstances, I personally believe it should be overcome and improved these situations