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The line graph shows the million dollars (That means that these countries spent a total of one million dollars for books.) expended on books in four distinct countries including Germany, France, Italy and, (no comma) Austria over a period of ten years starting in 1995.

Overall, the amount of money spent on books in these countries surveyed (Do the instructions indicate that the data came from a survey?) showed an upward trend during the period. Germany’ (wrong form) expenditure on books was higher than that of the other three countries.

the German (This means one person in Germany.) expended 80 million dollars on books in 1995, while 50 million dollars was spent in Italy. The amount of money spent on books in Germany continued to rise slightly to 85 million dollars in 2003 and was followed by an increase of 5 million dollars in 2004 and 2005. There was a consistent increase of 10 million dollars in the Italian’s expenditure spent (??) on books at the end of over the period.

In 1995, the amount of money spent on books was 55 million dollars and 30 million dollars in France and Austria respectively. By 2005, the amount of money that French people of French has poured into (That is not a good expression for a math/science context) books increased by 10 million dollars, a total of with 70 million dollars (That does not agree with 55 million + 10 million = 65, not 70 million.) . The same pattern was true for Austria, whose’s (wrong form) comparable figure (wrong word) showed a significant increase of 30 million dollars, which almost shared was the same value as with France’s.