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The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the million dollars expended on books in four distinct countries including Germany, France, Italy and, Austria over a period of ten years starting in 1995.

Overall, the amount of money spent on books in countries surveyed showed an upward trend during the period. Germany’ expenditure on books was higher than that of the other three countries.

the German expended 80 million dollars on books in 1995, while 50 million dollars was spent in Italy. The amount of money spent on books in Germany continued to rise slightly to 85 million dollars in 2003 and followed by an increase of 5 million dollars in 2005. There was a consistent increase of 10 million dollars in the Italian’s expenditure spent on books at the end of the period.

In 1995, the amount of money spent on books was 55 million dollars and 30 million dollars in France and Austria respectively. By 2005, the amount of money of French has poured into books increased by 10 million dollars, with 70 million dollars. The same pattern was true for Austria, whose’s comparable figure showed a significant increase of 30 million dollars, which almost shared the same value with France’s.