Please check my writing task 1. How to build your own water clock

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The diagram below shows the process for making a water clock. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The diagram describes how to recreate a water timer. In general, the process includes many steps, beginning with the flow of water from the tap and ending at the plastic bottle.To begin with, a set of compartments is required to build the water clock. First of all, a L-shaped stand is put under the tap with its top attached to a plain plastic bottle whose bottom has a hole by tape. In addition, a straw is glued into one side of that bottle. At the bottom of the stand, there is a stratified bottle with its neck cut off.Once the tool is ready, turn on the tap and put a finger beneath the plain bottle to allow the water to fill in. The excess amount of water will leave through the straw in order to keep the water level unchanged. After that stage, release the finger to let water flow into the second bottle which displays levels per minute. Finally, eliminate the content and repeat another process.

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The diagram describes how to recreate a water timer. (wrong words) In general, the process includes many steps, beginning with the flow of water from the tap and ending at the plastic bottle. (That is not a step. A step is an action, for example "open the tap",) and "Observe the water level", not a thing like a plastic bottle.)

To begin with, a set of compartments (wrong word) is required to build a ~~the~~ water clock. First of all, a an L-shaped stand is put under a ~~the~~ tap. The tap is the the source of water to fill the body of the clock. with its top attached to (poor description) a plain plastic bottle whose bottom has a hole by tape. (wrong usage) In addition, a straw is glued into one side of that bottle. At the bottom of the stand, there is a stratified (wrong word) bottle with its neck cut off.

Model paragraph:

The parts needed to build a water clock are: 1) an L-shaped stand 2) two plastic water bottles, one with its neck cut off with level marks engraved in its body (bottle "A"), and one with a small hole punched in the bottom (bottle "B"), 3) a straw, and 4) tape and glue.

To assemble the parts, secure bottle "B" to the top of the stand with tape, and place bottle "A" beneath it. The straw, which controls the water overflow, is inserted and glued into the side of bottle "B" near the neck. Place the whole assembly beneath a water tap.

Once the tool (wrong word) is ready, turn on the tap and put a finger beneath the plain bottle to allow the water to fill in. The excess amount of water will leave through the straw in order to keep the water level unchanged. After that stage, release the finger to let water flow into the second bottle which displays levels per minute. Finally, eliminate (wrong word) the content and repeat ~~another process~~.

Please check my writing task 1. How to build your own water clock

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