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Topic: the line graph below give information from a 2008 report about consumption of energi in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030.
The line graph illustrates the amount of USA energy consumed since 1980 with expection until 2030.
As can be seen, petrol and oil energy is by far the most popular energy consumption in the USA while nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower energy was lowest over the given period.
In 1980, petrol and oil energy started at 35 quadrillion and stand at the 1st place, wherease coal and natural gas energy started at 20 and 15 quadrillion respectively. In that year, nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower only one fifth of the amount of coal energy. In the period between 1980 and 2015, petrol and oil energy was increased slightly to 41 quadrillion. Also in that year, there was a fluctuation in the number of coal and natural gas energy, at 22 quadrillion, while three remainning energy were remain relatively stable at around 5 quadrllion.
By 2030, petrol and oil energy is predicted to rise considerably and reach a peak in the last year, at 47 quadrillion, and the amount of coal energy is expected to grow rapidly to 28 quadrillion. Lastly, natural gas, nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower energy is anticipated to remain the same figure like it was in 2015.
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