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Batwing Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Please check my writing style

"I just wanna say a few things.Life sucks but it's going to get better.It's silly to think so when your life seems so messed up that nothing can fix it.But there's gonna be a day where you smile a little broader, laugh a little longer and feel a lot stronger.Right now, you're in the depths of despair.You wanna cry, then go ahead.You wanna scream? Scream.If you wanna let the rage out then go wreaking things with a hammer.Tomorrow may not be a better day, but it's always worth the wait."
  

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"Wanna" and "gonna" are not acceptable for writing. " Put in a space after a period. In writing, you should use complete sentences: If you want to cry, go ahead.

— Englishmaven

  • "Wanna" and "gonna" are not acceptable for writing.
  • " Put in a space after a period.
  • In writing, you should use complete sentences: If you want to cry, go ahead.
  • Do you want to scream?
  • Scream.
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"Wanna" and "gonna" are not acceptable for writing. Write "want to" and "going to." Put in a space after a period. In writing, you should use complete sentences: If you want to cry, go ahead. Do you want to scream? Scream.

I would write both sentences as declarative or both as interrogatives. You have a declarative and then an interrogative.

Check your spelling: wrecking. If you

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